Fun, Bill
but I’m not sure of the tone of
that necked noggin
usually reserved
for nutting out,
against the rest. Also felt like you might be able to do more with the sense of body-as-rocket I felt emerging there…?
Doug
> On Feb 28, 2017, at 2:15 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> Hurtling into hard matter
> The shock of penetration
> Joined fingers pierce
> but it's the head,
> that necked noggin
> usually reserved
> for nutting out,
> housing expressions,
> now the chief impactor,
> smacking into flat wet.
> First dive into still pool.
>
> The noise, the back-thrust
> the intense present
> before torso and limbs
> catch up.
> You've done it.
> Let go.
> You're in
> another zone.
>
> Fears faced.
> Familiar earth
> deliberately abandoned
> for unbreathable water.
>
> bw
Douglas Barbour
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