Hi Bill good to see you snapping!!!cheers P
I got a bit confused as to whether it was three poems-interest comparing
building terms (up My old Architect days streak)
I take the link to be impact 'nutting out ' is new to me must be Ozz
talk :-)
On 28/02/2017 21:15, Bill Wootton wrote:
> Hurtling into hard matter
> The shock of penetration
> Joined fingers pierce
> but it's the head,
> that necked noggin
> usually reserved
> for nutting out,
> housing expressions,
> now the chief impactor,
> smacking into flat wet.
> First dive into still pool.
>
> The noise, the back-thrust
> the intense present
> before torso and limbs
> catch up.
> You've done it.
> Let go.
> You're in
> another zone.
>
> Fears faced.
> Familiar earth
> deliberately abandoned
> for unbreathable water.
>
> bw
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