definitely brute emotions same as us!!
On 24/04/2019 07:52, Bill Wootton wrote:
> Interesting notion, Patrick. Did hs frustration take the form of thoughts I
> wonder or brute emotions only?
>
> Could you drop ‘and also’ from the third stanza?
>
> Bill
>
> On Wed, 24 Apr 2019 at 4:36 pm, Patrick McManus <
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>
>> WRITERS BLOCK
>>
>> the poet
>> was sulking
>> rather frustrated
>> realising that
>> writing had not
>> yet been invented
>> let alone language
>>
>> and
>> outside
>> his cave
>> there was
>> that mangey
>> sabre tooth tiger
>> stalking him
>>
>> and also
>> perhaps he will
>> have to just
>> take up wall
>> painting
>>
>>
>> pmcmanus
>> s468
>>
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