thanks Doug will give deep thought maybe 42 is the answer
On 24/04/2019 16:49, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> It’s implied Patrick, & I think sounds better & tauter without.. but, of course, your call…
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> Doug
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>> On Apr 24, 2019, at 9:28 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Thanks Douglas will consider but -for this old head 'and also' follows from his 'and' problem above -yet another ordeal cheers old P
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>> On 24/04/2019 15:54, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>>> An intriguingly comic vision of the past (present), Patrick. But I agree with Bill: you don’t need that ‘and also’…
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>>> Doug
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>>>> On Apr 24, 2019, at 12:35 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>>> WRITERS BLOCK
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>>>> the poet
>>>> was sulking
>>>> rather frustrated
>>>> realising that
>>>> writing had not
>>>> yet been invented
>>>> let alone language
>>>>
>>>> and
>>>> outside
>>>> his cave
>>>> there was
>>>> that mangey
>>>> sabre tooth tiger
>>>> stalking him
>>>>
>>>> and also
>>>> perhaps he will
>>>> have to just
>>>> take up wall
>>>> painting
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> pmcmanus
>>>> s468
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