Thanks, Sheila, Patrick. It was a wonderful moment in a breakfast bar in
Aix-en-Provence. I’ve had a few goes at it now, the last, this:
ha.iku
a cigarette, unlit,
hiccoughs from her mouth;
laughter overspill.
bw
18.6.18
Bill
On Wed, 20 Jun 2018 at 10:33 am, Patrick McManus <
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> haha rather like someone I knew who could snatch flies
>
> grey morning here
>
>
> On 20/06/2018 07:20, Sheila Murphy wrote:
> > Very immediate, Bill! Palpable!
> >
> > On Tue, Jun 19, 2018, 11:08 PM Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> >
> >> sputters up so spontaneously
> >>
> >> that from unpursed lips
> >>
> >> her unlit cigarette springs
> >>
> >> gyrates
> >>
> >> lands longitudinally
> >>
> >> on her pulsing lap
> >>
> >> where with light fist
> >>
> >> she snaffles it on the bounce
> >>
> >>
> >> bw
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