Thanks all (& good to see you here again Tina).
Space is pause. And I was going for the 5/7/5 syllables…
Doug
> On Dec 15, 2016, at 6:21 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Like 'skein' of cloud particularly, Doug. Echo Pat on spacing but I know
> you like doing it.
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> Bill
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> On Thu., 15 Dec. 2016 at 9:23 pm, Patrick McManus <
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>> Douglas not sure about the space between' moon and a'does it need an
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>> and or something closer together with or '-'
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>> or not cheers P who knows I ramble and off to shop on trusty bike many
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>> panniered- a trusty mechanical donkey
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>> On 14/12/2016 18:49, Douglas Barbour wrote:
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>>> full moon a balloon
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>>> hovers in a skein of cloud
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>>> almost Japanese
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>>> Douglas Barbour
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>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
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>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
>> Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
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>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
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>>> Venerable Optimist
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>>> He saw the dark as a ragged garment
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>>> spread out to air.
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>>> Through its rents and moth-holes
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>>> the silver light came pouring.
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>>>
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>>> Denise Levertov
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Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Venerable Optimist
He saw the dark as a ragged garment
spread out to air.
Through its rents and moth-holes
the silver light came pouring.
Denise Levertov
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