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Thanks all (& good to see you here again Tina). Space is pause. And I was going for the 5/7/5 syllables… Doug > On Dec 15, 2016, at 6:21 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > Like 'skein' of cloud particularly, Doug. Echo Pat on spacing but I know > you like doing it. > > Bill > > On Thu., 15 Dec. 2016 at 9:23 pm, Patrick McManus < > [log in to unmask]> wrote: > >> Douglas not sure about the space between' moon and a'does it need an >> >> and or something closer together with or '-' >> >> >> >> or not cheers P who knows I ramble and off to shop on trusty bike many >> >> panniered- a trusty mechanical donkey >> >> >> >> >> >> On 14/12/2016 18:49, Douglas Barbour wrote: >> >>> full moon a balloon >> >>> hovers in a skein of cloud >> >>> almost Japanese >> >>> >> >>> >> >>> Douglas Barbour >> >>> [log in to unmask] >> >>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ >> >>> >> >>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & >> Continuations 2 (UofAPress). >> >>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press). >> >>> >> >>> Venerable Optimist >> >>> >> >>> He saw the dark as a ragged garment >> >>> spread out to air. >> >>> Through its rents and moth-holes >> >>> the silver light came pouring. >> >>> >> >>> Denise Levertov >> >> Douglas Barbour [log in to unmask] https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress). Recording Dates (Rubicon Press). Venerable Optimist He saw the dark as a ragged garment spread out to air. Through its rents and moth-holes the silver light came pouring. Denise Levertov