Thanks Millicent. I wasn't sure of the parentheses.
Bill
On 22/07/2015, at 9:24 AM, Millicent Borges Accardi wrote:
> Really love this passage!
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> informatively, looking
> for all the world at first,
> like
> workmanlike,
> jobbing sentence components)
> and then,
> (right under your eyes as
> it were,
> before you're aware)
> transform
> through dent of odd
> placement
> or
> line
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
> To: POETRYETC <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Tue, Jul 21, 2015 3:00 pm
> Subject: Drifters
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> Drifters
>
> First drift
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> Can words drift
> into poetry,
> (begin prosaically,
>
> informatively, looking
> for all the world at first,
> like
> workmanlike,
> jobbing sentence components)
> and then,
> (right under your eyes as
> it were,
> before you're aware)
> transform
> through dent of odd
> placement
> or
> line
> turn,
> into
> thought-provocative
> perception-inverters,
> mood-changers,
> joy
> inspirers,
> propellers
> into the
> uncanny?
>
>
> Second drift
>
> Can words
> drift into poetry?
> Beginning prosaically,
> informatively, looking
> for all
> the world,
> to be workmanlike,
> jobbing sentence components,
> then right beneath
> your eyes,
> as it were,
> before you're aware,
> transforming,
> through dent of
> odd
> placement
> or line
> turn,
> into
> mood-changers,
> joy-inspirers,
> perception-inverters,
> propellers
> into uncanny
> mind zones?
>
> bw
> 22 .7.15
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> Preferences, other ideas, people of the
> poetryetc?
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