Minus one here. Oh why did I ever leave a warm climate! Andrew with Icicles
On 10 July 2013 08:11, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Ah, double doonaa time all right, Max. Taken by the mashed potato cumulus
> image and the gelato sunset. Could 'makes' be removed from line four?
>
> Bill
>
> On 10/07/2013, at 7:20 AM, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > Melbourne Winter
> >
> > Sprawled luxuriating
> > in this warm king-size
> > bed while outside Melbourne's
> > winter makes folk grumble,
> >
> > I smile to myself: who's
> > so infuriating
> > as to criticize
> > the weather! humble
> >
> > yourselves, guys.
> > And stay inside in bed.
> > They say We have to work,
> > shop, and exercise.
> >
> > Wrap up then, and shut up.
> > The sun still crosses the skies.
> > Sunlit clouds today - I saw them
> > mount up like mashed potatoes.
> >
> > Sunset - gelato excess
> > of lurid tastelessness.
> > As the cold set in I fled
> > to this double-doona bed.
> >
>
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Andrew
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