Ah, double doonaa time all right, Max. Taken by the mashed potato cumulus image and the gelato sunset. Could 'makes' be removed from line four?
Bill
On 10/07/2013, at 7:20 AM, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Melbourne Winter
>
> Sprawled luxuriating
> in this warm king-size
> bed while outside Melbourne's
> winter makes folk grumble,
>
> I smile to myself: who's
> so infuriating
> as to criticize
> the weather! humble
>
> yourselves, guys.
> And stay inside in bed.
> They say We have to work,
> shop, and exercise.
>
> Wrap up then, and shut up.
> The sun still crosses the skies.
> Sunlit clouds today - I saw them
> mount up like mashed potatoes.
>
> Sunset - gelato excess
> of lurid tastelessness.
> As the cold set in I fled
> to this double-doona bed.
>
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