Unwittingly, Sheila but thanks for alerting me. A short browse shows the
form has already been adapted and expanded by Tabios as in this extract
from Brown-ing moon.
Walking continually these
streets and
alleys.
All wall cracks
and road
holes
are known to
me. I
am
the one listening
to peripheral
languages
signaling from hubcaps,
shining metals,
bright
plastics, painted woods.
The construction
site
overwhelms with its
orchestrations of
colors,
sounds, shards--its
chaos and
order
exchanging forms. Melted
snow runs
in
rivulets among smashed stones.
Bill
On Wed, 15 Jan 2020 at 8:28 am, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Hay(na)ku a la Eileen Tabios form Bill, either wittingly or unwittingly. I
> like this. Very sharp. Gracias. Southwestern Sheila
>
> On Tue, Jan 14, 2020 at 2:00 PM Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
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> > reading -
> > spending words
> > saved by others
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