Doug, I like the combination of the instructional with the process of composition. Wish I could write this variety of ekphrastic, but I haven't yet. Barry
On Wed, 29 May 2019 19:23:21 +0100, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>swift movement catching line !
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>On 29/05/2019 18:57, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>> look at that bare back
>> keep looking
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>> charcoal pencil in hand
>> see the weight of flesh
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>> wait till eye & hand mesh
>> three strokes only
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>> to catch the volume
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>> that person that body
>> partially looking away
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>> Douglas Barbour
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>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
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>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
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>> Four or five couplets trying to dance
>> into Persia. Who dances in Persia now?
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>> A magic carpet, a prayer mat, red.
>> A knocked off head of somebody on her broken knees.
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