Did anybody read my poem? Any comments - good, bad or indifferent - are
welcome.
Andrew
On 31 July 2015 at 00:46, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I'd love some feedback on the following, if you have time.
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> Life is a hit album,
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> concept pending.
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> As spring dusts off
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> the holding yards,
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> North stays steady in a storm.
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> We plan
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> but rarely complete.
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> It’s a game of millimetres,
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> of a bee’s tit. Where
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> you came from
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> you go: *turn *
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> *to us with confidence.*
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> - Andrew Burke
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