On 20/08/2015, at 9:30 PM, Jill Jones wrote:
> Hi Sheila,
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> Thanks again. Geometric is a great word!
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> I've always been interested in how prepositions work, in English. Of course, I know they work differently in other languages or not so much at all. But position and place. Then working with pronouns, such as this poem, also has an idea of place and placement - point of view, to start with. Angles, yes.
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> I'm also interested in the turn and that poem has a number of them. I know the question will be, can there be too many turns in a poem. It's a poetry idea I'm working on at the moment.
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> Jill
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> On 20/08/2015, at 12:42 PM, Sheila Murphy wrote:
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>> Hey, Jill,
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>> This one takes me into the distance without my going too far afield to
>> think and feel. The different stanzas turn me. I value what you have done
>> here, almost geometric in its approach, with the different angles showing
>> richness.
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>> Sheila
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