Thanks Andrew. I did want, of course, precisely that reading you offer too.
Bill
> On 10 Jun 2015, at 6:44 pm, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> I hear it (but I also like its surface reading - taken as 'knots' of
> tangled thought and worry). (One type of ambiguity.)
>
> A
>
>> On 10 June 2015 at 18:33, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Thanks but just wondering, Pat, Andrew, whether this is a poem that needs
>> to be spoken to spell out the pun which just occurred to me while I was
>> 'not sleeping'.
>>
>> Bill
>>
>>
>>> On 10 Jun 2015, at 5:36 pm, Patrick McManus <
>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>
>>> Thanks Bill -a short one-those knots can unravel -very messy cheers P
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
>>> Behalf Of Bill Wootton
>>> Sent: 10 June 2015 07:02
>>> To: [log in to unmask]
>>> Subject: Insomnia
>>>
>>> Insomnia
>>>
>>> lying here
>>> knots leaping
>>>
>>> bw
>>>
>>
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