I hear it (but I also like its surface reading - taken as 'knots' of
tangled thought and worry). (One type of ambiguity.)
A
On 10 June 2015 at 18:33, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Thanks but just wondering, Pat, Andrew, whether this is a poem that needs
> to be spoken to spell out the pun which just occurred to me while I was
> 'not sleeping'.
>
> Bill
>
>
> > On 10 Jun 2015, at 5:36 pm, Patrick McManus <
> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >
> > Thanks Bill -a short one-those knots can unravel -very messy cheers P
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> > Behalf Of Bill Wootton
> > Sent: 10 June 2015 07:02
> > To: [log in to unmask]
> > Subject: Insomnia
> >
> > Insomnia
> >
> > lying here
> > knots leaping
> >
> > bw
> >
>
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