Ah, hungry foxes abound in Corowa, raiding the chicken houses and any small
easy prey.
Andrew
On 8 May 2014 00:36, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I enjoyed them too, Bill: the tightness mostly.
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> Agree with max though: can you image what 'evidence' is? And I'm not sure
> you need the 'ly' on 'undoglikely' or else 'undogly' )w/ its undertones)....
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> When its this sharp, we ask for a bit more edge?
>
> Doug
> On May 7, 2014, at 2:53 AM, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> > Foxes? is there anywhere without them?
> >
> > My urban park is said to have them -
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> > 'watch out for the hollow where they all pee - dogs love to wallow
> there...'
> >
> > While enjoying both, I wondered about 'proportions' and 'evidence of
> transit', words that maybe
> > weight down the movement.
> >
> > best from Max in Melbourne
> > On 7 May 2014, at 6:46 pm, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
> >
> >> Thanks, Andrew. Foxy up Corowa ways these sharp mornings?
> >>
> >> Bill
> >>
> >>> On 7 May 2014, at 5:18 pm, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> I enjoyed 'em.
> >>>
> >>> Andrew
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>> On 7 May 2014 16:39, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> Thanks, Pat. You are probably right. I wanted to suggest latent fox
> power
> >>>> but perhaps inertia doesn't do it.
> >>>>
> >>>>>> On 7 May 2014, at 4:19 pm, Patrick McManus <
> >>>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Bill enjoyed these not sure about title first -does it need inertia ?
> >>>>> Cheers P
> >>>>>
> >>>>> -----Original Message-----
> >>>>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> On
> >>>>> Behalf Of Bill Wootton
> >>>>> Sent: 06 May 2014 22:56
> >>>>> To: [log in to unmask]
> >>>>> Subject: Two snaps, one subject
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 1. Red inertia
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Even-haunched
> >>>>> cool stepper
> >>>>> intent
> >>>>> as a gunslinger.
> >>>>> Fox.
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 2. Fox
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Inhabiting canine proportions
> >>>>> moving decidedly undoglikely
> >>>>> slow sweeping soft stepping
> >>>>>
> >>>>> from lemon-scented shade
> >>>>> down stony path in fat rabbit
> >>>>> wake. Splay tail obliterating
> >>>>>
> >>>>> evidence of transit. From
> >>>>> where does all that red
> >>>>> swagger spring?
> >>>>>
> >>>>> bw
> >>>
> >
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> precise about whatever
> it is you are
> saying, I said
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> Bill Manhire
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