Love the 2nd stanza, Jill, but partly because it fits & keeps the whole moving...
Doug
On 2012-06-20, at 5:13 AM, Jill Jones wrote:
> Rain’s direction
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> those lines the cold
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> valley be home late
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> private window much hall
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> say waiting to
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> kiss during nothing or
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> skin I and after
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> roses full of less
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> keeling wantonness.
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> Cold blue tiles
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> bare before graces
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> And find less guilty
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> the present fall and
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> whirlpools.
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> Rub paper into floor
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> heave frailties
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> mark what’s complicated
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> heave cases full
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> of charms
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> mud and sticks.
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