Thanks Doug.
Still not sure about the cap And. Left for the moment.
J
On 21/06/2012, at 2:29 AM, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> Love the 2nd stanza, Jill, but partly because it fits & keeps the whole moving...
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> Doug
> On 2012-06-20, at 5:13 AM, Jill Jones wrote:
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>> Rain’s direction
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>> those lines the cold
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>> valley be home late
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>> private window much hall
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>> say waiting to
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>> kiss during nothing or
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>> skin I and after
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>> roses full of less
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>> keeling wantonness.
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>> Cold blue tiles
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>> bare before graces
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>> And find less guilty
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>> the present fall and
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>> whirlpools.
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>> Rub paper into floor
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>> heave frailties
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>> mark what’s complicated
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>> heave cases full
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>> of charms
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>> mud and sticks.
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