excellent. very little-mythic & descriptive.
though I think if you're going to use commas, either use them
consistently or not at all, in this case anyway. would you say this
could work comma-less?
KS
On 23/01/2008, sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Wolf Moon
>
> Wolf Moon, is that you
> howling through the courtyard
> banging at our windows
> stripping shingles from the roof
> demanding to be let in? You,
>
> hungry, in your winter coat,
> fur tipped with frost and snow?
> I hear you prowling, your breath
> puffs coldness under the door.
> Wolf Moon, I cannot see you,
>
> but I know you're there.
>
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>
>
> ~ SB | http://www.sbpoet.com | =^..^=
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