after seeing one of your previous poems on your website, i thought as
much... my way of suggesting a reconsideration of the use of those...
which version is unimportant to me...
--
Bob Marcacci
One must be drenched in words, literally soaked in them, to have the right
ones form themselves into the proper patterns at the right moment.
- Hart Crane
> From: kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]>
> Reply-To: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" <[log in to unmask]>
> Date: Fri, 4 May 2007 19:03:45 +0300
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Subject: Re: starpoem
>
> Bob, myself. is it not common to post poetry on a poetry list?
>
> clunkiness/clinkiness noted. this is a first version.
> Andrew, not sure how to help you.. I intended the poem to be fairly
> straightforward.
>
> KS
>
> On 04/05/07, Bob Marcacci <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> what are you quoting?
>>
>> --
>> Bob Marcacci
>>
>> The influence of each human being on others in this
>> life is a kind of immortality.
>> - John Quincy Adams
>>
>>
>>
>>> From: kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]>
>>> Reply-To: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" <[log in to unmask]>
>>> Date: Fri, 4 May 2007 13:03:44 +0300
>>> To: <[log in to unmask]>
>>> Subject: starpoem
>>>
>>> "cassiopeia"
>>>
>>> Water sang in the sky as if in a cave,
>>> Wet beads on godskin pulsing to sugar:
>>> While spring strains, this ceremony clinks.
>>> We don't pretend our eyes to have maps, & a
>>> Waning evening grows old in three hundred nights.
>>> Witch: you flower-eyed sorceress: each new look, the
>>> World reconjures your face.
>>>
>>> KS
>>
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