Nice, Andrew. I sense part of it is still a sketch among 'the larger'
picture. 'But the eye doth pleaseth'!
Stephen V
http://stephenvincent.net/blog/
> dawn rain washes the dust off the town
> so Chinese builders play cards inside
> the building they are building
>
> blue metal mountain is rinsed
> and a great wall of handmade bricks
> leans against the wind
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> the town's heat has been turned off
> so uni officers huddle over heaters
> as they plan the semester schedule
>
> a lone student walks in the rain
> her new umbrella as yellow as the sun
> before the dark grey clouds
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> Andrew
> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
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