To be honest it's all over the place, slight, and the result of trying
to write in a strange hotel room and from a strange emotional position.
There's more in that shiny horned beetle than the rest, and there's not
a deal in him. Ack.
caleb
-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Douglas Barbour
Sent: Friday, 2 February 2007 3:10 AM
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: Re: Late snap - apologies...
That's part of it, & it does shift in a smart irregular way, Caleb, but
'eternal' was what stopped me; just didn't seem to belong...
Doug
On 1-Feb-07, at 4:07 AM, Heather Taylor wrote:
> I really like the images but I'm not sure about the repetition of
> "how" to
> start each new image - it didn't flow for me. Not sure what to
> suggest but
> maybe you can just eliminate them and it will work...
>
> Good stuff.
> H
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Caleb Cluff [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> Sent: 31 January 2007 23:19
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Late snap - apologies...
>
> Am I so graceless, unable to see
> at the first cautious whisper of rain,
>
> how the gum offers slight green gossip,
>
> how the dung beetle, anthracite teardrop,
> goes about his task without myth,
>
> how your eternal face fell
> as we left the room.
>
>
> Caleb Cluff
> Majorca 31/1/07
>
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