Thanks everyone; it was what ir was as I drove along. I do try to see what can be seen…
Winter has come, & some of that dusting remains on the bushes the sun can’t reach..
Bill, I wish we could send some snow to help with the fires…; which look ever more terrible each time the news carries another story.
Doug
> On Nov 21, 2019, at 7:46 AM, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> I like it without 'turned to slush' ... (less is more, kind of)
>
> Andrew
>
> On Thu, 21 Nov 2019 at 18:22, Patrick McManus <
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>> Doug the turning to slush after such a bright sparkling start made me
>> sad -cheers P
>>
>> On 20/11/2019 22:07, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>>> that light dust of snow stuck
>>> to every twig & branch
>>>
>>> glows in the lowering sun
>>>
>>> below turned to slush
>>>
>>> it dulls the asphalt
>>> lost in shadows
>>>
>>>
>>> Douglas Barbour
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>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>
>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
>> Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>>
>>>
>>> Swept snow, Li Po,
>>> by dawn’s 40-watt moon
>>> to the road that hies to office
>>> away from home.
>>>
>>> Lorine Niedecker
>>>
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Listen. If (UofAPress):
Swept snow, Li Po,
by dawn’s 40-watt moon
to the road that hies to office
away from home.
Lorine Niedecker
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