Interesting point, Barry, & I agree; the one word lines work here, Patrick, but ‘turning’…what?
Doug
> On Aug 23, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Patrick,
>
> Very precise rendering, though I feel the need for one word describing the exact shade of colouration. When I sort out which bunch of grapes to buy from the grocery, I know the indicators of overripe but rarely see "just/turning" in any context.
>
> Barry
>
> On Wed, 23 Aug 2017 11:00:31 +0100, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Bill thanks that first tinge very exciting -I liked trying the play
>> with 'turning' -and spinning out single word like the gradual process of
>> ripening
>>
>> -looking forward to when they are ripe!P
>>
>>
>> On 23/08/2017 09:59, Bill Wootton wrote:
>>> Good on those turning grapes, Patrick. Like the one-word reveals too.
>>>
>>> Bill
>>>
>>> On Wed, 23 Aug 2017 at 6:13 pm, Patrick McManus <
>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>
>>>> *AUGUST 23^th *
>>>>
>>>> outside
>>>>
>>>> my
>>>>
>>>> bedroom
>>>>
>>>> window
>>>>
>>>> the
>>>>
>>>> grapes
>>>>
>>>> are
>>>>
>>>> just
>>>>
>>>> turning
>>>>
>>>> /pmcmanus/
>>>>
>>>> /s194/
>>>>
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