Thanks Bill, Andrew, Patrick ..
I remain an old dog still trying to play the tricks of rhythm & line I learned from various New American poets & some important Canadian ones (& going back to Williams & Pound)…
Doug
> On Aug 23, 2017, at 8:56 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> ... or not to be, Doug? So many ways to read this, depending on emphases.
> All the more interesting for the punctuation lack and large airy pockets
> within.
>
> Bill
>
> On Thu, 24 Aug 2017 at 12:33 PM, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Ah, a lot of compression in a short lyrical space. Nice to go back to a
>> number of times.
>>
>> Andrew
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>> On 24 August 2017 at 01:46, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]
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>> wrote:
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>>> Douglas thanks am appreciating your scattered layout cheers P
>>>
>>> held & gone
>>>
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>>>
>>> On 23/08/2017 17:02, Douglas Barbour wrote:
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>>>> a moment’s
>>>> hesitation to be
>>>> that thought
>>>> lost again less
>>>> seen again
>>>> than seeing
>>>> mirrored the past
>>>> a post once
>>>> held & gone
>>>>
>>>> Douglas Barbour
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>>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
>> Continuations
>>>> 2 (UofAPress).
>>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> There was the usual amount of corruption, intimidation, and rioting.
>>>>
>>>> Sir Charles Petrie
>>>>
>>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Andrew
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Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Listen. If (UofAPress):
There was the usual amount of corruption, intimidation, and rioting.
Sir Charles Petrie
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