Jill, Still enjoying your fresh-to-me diction "dotty sunlight" and "ground's blebs and gash tricks". Barry
On Wed, 9 Aug 2017 09:06:43 -0600, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>Welcome back, Jill!
>
>'queer bevelled’ shifting to those shared similes: neat; a lightness of light indeed.
>
>Doug
>
>> On Aug 9, 2017, at 3:43 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> we have rain!!!
>>
>>
>> On 09/08/2017 10:16, Jill Jones wrote:
>>> Thanks, Patrick,
>>>
>>> I guess a few sparks still in this queer old shadow - awaiting spring
>>> ...
>>>
>>> You have sun there?
>>>
>>> J
>>> ________________________
>>> Jill Jones
>>> www.jilljones.com.au
>>>
>>> Latest book: Brink, Five Islands Press
>>> http://fiveislandspress.com/catalogue/brink-jill-jones
>>>
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
>>> To:
>>> Cc:
>>> Sent:Wed, 9 Aug 2017 10:12:46 +0100
>>> Subject:Re: Snap from an ancient
>>>
>>> Jill thanks I am cheered you made it worth all the effort well done
>>> there is life sparkle yet in this group!!!!!!:-)
>>>
>>> as mossy tokens wrinkle
>>>
>>> On 09/08/2017 10:03, Jill Jones wrote:
>>> > OK, I hear your call and here I am resurfacing.
>>> >
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > SNAP: SERIOUS WAVERING
>>> >
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > within this dotty sunlight
>>> >
>>> > and gusts of beams on a wall
>>> >
>>> > shadows sway in
>>> >
>>> > queer bevelled _trémulo_
>>> >
>>> > make abstract shape
>>> >
>>> > on ground’s blebs and gash tricks
>>> >
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > as light without maps
>>> >
>>> > like cosmos winks
>>> >
>>> > like ribbons and motes
>>> >
>>> > inventories to exploit
>>> >
>>> > as mossy tokens wrinkle
>>> >
>>> > a bower with its prism
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > ________________________
>>> > Jill Jones
>>> > www.jilljones.com.au
>>> >
>>> > ----- Original Message -----
>>> > From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
>>> > To:
>>> > Cc:
>>> > Sent:Wed, 9 Aug 2017 09:46:24 +0100
>>> > Subject:SNAPS WANTED NEEDED URGENTLY
>>> >
>>> > are you all off on holidays ?where are your sweet snaps??
>>> >
>>> > try you can still do the day is young -well it is here in the rains
>>> > /mists of chilly south London
>>> >
>>> > do a snap cheer an old wreck up P XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
>>> >
>>>
>
>Douglas Barbour
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>Will be replaced by
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