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Jill, Still enjoying your fresh-to-me diction "dotty sunlight" and "ground's blebs and gash tricks". Barry On Wed, 9 Aug 2017 09:06:43 -0600, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >Welcome back, Jill! > >'queer bevelled’ shifting to those shared similes: neat; a lightness of light indeed. > >Doug > >> On Aug 9, 2017, at 3:43 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >> >> we have rain!!! >> >> >> On 09/08/2017 10:16, Jill Jones wrote: >>> Thanks, Patrick, >>> >>> I guess a few sparks still in this queer old shadow - awaiting spring >>> ... >>> >>> You have sun there? >>> >>> J >>> ________________________ >>> Jill Jones >>> www.jilljones.com.au >>> >>> Latest book: Brink, Five Islands Press >>> http://fiveislandspress.com/catalogue/brink-jill-jones >>> >>> ----- Original Message ----- >>> From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" >>> To: >>> Cc: >>> Sent:Wed, 9 Aug 2017 10:12:46 +0100 >>> Subject:Re: Snap from an ancient >>> >>> Jill thanks I am cheered you made it worth all the effort well done >>> there is life sparkle yet in this group!!!!!!:-) >>> >>> as mossy tokens wrinkle >>> >>> On 09/08/2017 10:03, Jill Jones wrote: >>> > OK, I hear your call and here I am resurfacing. >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > SNAP: SERIOUS WAVERING >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > within this dotty sunlight >>> > >>> > and gusts of beams on a wall >>> > >>> > shadows sway in >>> > >>> > queer bevelled _trémulo_ >>> > >>> > make abstract shape >>> > >>> > on ground’s blebs and gash tricks >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > as light without maps >>> > >>> > like cosmos winks >>> > >>> > like ribbons and motes >>> > >>> > inventories to exploit >>> > >>> > as mossy tokens wrinkle >>> > >>> > a bower with its prism >>> > >>> > >>> > ________________________ >>> > Jill Jones >>> > www.jilljones.com.au >>> > >>> > ----- Original Message ----- >>> > From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" >>> > To: >>> > Cc: >>> > Sent:Wed, 9 Aug 2017 09:46:24 +0100 >>> > Subject:SNAPS WANTED NEEDED URGENTLY >>> > >>> > are you all off on holidays ?where are your sweet snaps?? >>> > >>> > try you can still do the day is young -well it is here in the rains >>> > /mists of chilly south London >>> > >>> > do a snap cheer an old wreck up P XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX >>> > >>> > >Douglas Barbour >[log in to unmask] >https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ > >Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress). >Recording Dates (Rubicon Press). >Listen. If (UofAPress): > > >In the new dispensation, conspiracy >Will be replaced by >Collusion, the diction of the age >Filtered through the great sieve of particulars >To be sorted out later, > > Ann Lauterbach