Hallo Anne!
Thank you for raising this issue.The number of responses, increasing by the
minute, shows that the questions related to ‘I/we’ and active vs. passive is
of considerable interest.
I am a language consultant living in Norway where much of my work
consists of editing articles to be published in scientific journals. In
addition I also check the language and styles of doctorate theses. The
following nevertheless comprises my immediate thoughts.
I am not convinced that the question of I/we is essentially linked to
the question of active vs. passive voice, i.e. the passive voice enables us
to avoid ‘I/we’. My understanding is that most – but not all – journals
prefer the active voice. Some specifically state this preference in the
Author Guidelines. But to be rigidly bound to the active (or passive voice,
as in the case of Anne’s daughter) is unnecessary. Some variety is
introduced into the style if one permits ‘The data in Table 1 show that …’,
and elsewhere ‘It is seen from the data in Table 1 …’.
First, a consideration of personal pronouns, especially the plural ‘we’?
This surely depends on the nature of the study. Some research projects will
be personal and related to a population as opposed to a sample. The
analytical method will be specific to that population study as will the
findings. It seem quite appropriate in such studies for the first person
singular (or plural) to be applied: ‘We tested the data using …; we found
that …’. The results are thus personal – subjective. Use of ‘I’ and ‘we’
serve to emphasize this.
Broader studies based on a sample are normally expected to yield
findings of a more general character. One indication of how ‘general’ the
results are will be indicated by the confidence intervals. Here the
impersonal, passive, form should be used: ‘The data was analysed using
one-way ANOVA’; ‘It was observed that ...’. In Writing in Psychology, T.
Raymond Smyth writes: ‘You should look at your experiment from an objective
standpoint, and again the use of personal pronouns can lead to a subjective
view’ (1996: 4),
A common ‘error’ is for authors to personalise studies based on samples
using the first person. But even more common is for a single author to use
‘we’ when he or she means ‘I’. No reference is made in the paper to whom ‘we’
are, or what role these other persons played in the research. This often
reflects some uncertainty in the method and findings, even in the hypothesis
and data, and where the author is apparently attempting to justify the
results. Further, I often notice that the conclusions in articles using this
style contain statements using words such as ‘probably’, ‘may’, ‘can’ and
others. I have even encountered papers where the hypothesis was clearly
formulated following a description of the data and method.
The use of ‘we’ in a discussion paper or text aimed at involving the
student: ‘We will see’; ‘we note that …’ and even ‘I think that …’; ‘My
interpretation of the results is …’. But the lecturer may well be advised to
add ‘… but that is my personal view’.
As stated, these are some initial thoughts. The may conflict with those
of other contributors, but there may well be some common ground. I am sure
we all look forward to Anne’s résumé.
John Taylor
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