True, Pat. Keep it.
Bill
> On 24 Jun 2015, at 6:37 pm, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> Bill thanks was wondering about that cheers P -itself perhaps implies of
> it's own volition?
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Bill Wootton
> Sent: 24 June 2015 09:25
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: pat lost disappeared snap 692
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>
> Just goes to show, I suppose, Pat that you can't afford to take your eye of
> these snaps. Pesky blighters. Would you consider excising 'itself' from line
> 16? Just a thought.
>
> Bill
>
>> On 24 Jun 2015, at 5:28 pm, Patrick McManus
> <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>> POETRYETC SNAP
>>
>> Wednesday
>> he carefully
>> wrote
>> his snap
>> customary
>> poetryetc snap
>> and left it
>> on the page
>> to dry off
>> but when
>> he came back
>> it had congealed
>> into a sinuous
>> resinous lump
>> and had flowed
>> itself off the page
>> onto the floor
>> down the stairs
>> out through the gap
>> under the front door
>> into the street
>> and disappeared
>>
>>
>> pmcmanus draft
>> r819
>>
>
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