Bill thanks was wondering about that cheers P -itself perhaps implies of
it's own volition?
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Behalf Of Bill Wootton
Sent: 24 June 2015 09:25
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Subject: Re: pat lost disappeared snap 692
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Just goes to show, I suppose, Pat that you can't afford to take your eye of
these snaps. Pesky blighters. Would you consider excising 'itself' from line
16? Just a thought.
Bill
> On 24 Jun 2015, at 5:28 pm, Patrick McManus
<[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> POETRYETC SNAP
>
> Wednesday
> he carefully
> wrote
> his snap
> customary
> poetryetc snap
> and left it
> on the page
> to dry off
> but when
> he came back
> it had congealed
> into a sinuous
> resinous lump
> and had flowed
> itself off the page
> onto the floor
> down the stairs
> out through the gap
> under the front door
> into the street
> and disappeared
>
>
> pmcmanus draft
> r819
>
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