This is very good, Jill. Thanks!
On Oct 29, 2014 3:27 AM, "Jill Jones" <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>
> parts, parted - that holds it, though I think hold is not exactly
> what I mean
>
> being here in the north I see this even more
>
> thanks,
>
> jill
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> Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au
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> Sent:Mon, 27 Oct 2014 10:59:18 -0700
> Subject:pre-snap
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> A spindly and
> transparent winter
> parts from
>
> lake
> the color snow,
> foreground
>
> of sticks
> alongside
> evening's pale
>
> sky parted
> from shared
> place.
>
> Sheila E. Murphy
>
>
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