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This is very good, Jill. Thanks! On Oct 29, 2014 3:27 AM, "Jill Jones" <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > > parts, parted - that holds it, though I think hold is not exactly > what I mean > > being here in the north I see this even more > > thanks, > > jill > ________________________ > > Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" > To: > Cc: > Sent:Mon, 27 Oct 2014 10:59:18 -0700 > Subject:pre-snap > > A spindly and > transparent winter > parts from > > lake > the color snow, > foreground > > of sticks > alongside > evening's pale > > sky parted > from shared > place. > > Sheila E. Murphy > >