I’m basically agreeing here, think that epigraph just too much to let the dog in…
l also wonder why the passive voice in the 2nd part? People are responsible for doing this. They are doing something similar here too…
Perhaps that passive just happened because ‘we’ (people like you & me, Max) feel so unable todo anything…?
Doug
On Aug 6, 2014, at 11:07 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> tough subject to tackle glad you are doing just that -not sure about the
> dog seems maybe bit lightweight I wonder if the poem could start at
> 'On certain islands off -thanks P
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Max Richards
> Sent: 06 August 2014 12:40
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: 'Self Harm'
>
> Self Harm
>
> 'My life is really deth' wrote one 12-year-old girl who had been physically
> abused in her homeland and whose mother had self-harmed in detention. She
> had not eaten or spoken for three days and was threatening self-harm. 'I
> wont to die becous in deth I know I can't live in here any more. If I go
> back to xxxxx I know they wil kell me and kell my family.'
>
>
> My dog is into self harm -
> bored by indoor captivity
> she sprawls on the carpet,
> rasps her tongue along her left
> foreleg till it's scraped raw.
>
> Ointment on it is meant
> to make the wound repellent.
> Something compels her
> to lick it off and keep licking.
> A trip to the vet is called for -
>
> bringing back what they call
> an Elizabethan ruff - plain
> plastic that curves over
> and is fastened into a cone,
> narrow at the dog's neck,
>
> wide at the outer rim.
> She can drink, eat, walk about -
> in spaces wider than the ruff -
> how wide she's slow to learn,
> scraping on doorways still.
>
> How many days before a cure?
> Last time was weeks. This time -
> we'll see. The ruff is part of a genial
> game she plays with us -
> rumpled ears, wagging tail.
>
> On certain islands off
> the Australian coast, kids
> and their mothers are interned.
> They've risked their lives seeking
> refuge from hard countries,
>
> find themselves now detained
> with hopes of admission denied
> by this country made of migrants.
> Months pass - for some, years.
> Self harm is noted, even suicide.
>
> Head-banging children, hunger strikes,
> panic attacks, refusal to speak,
> monotony, desperation.
> Whoever governs Australia,
> they do too little to help.
>
> They'd rather 'send them home',
> these homeless people.
> The men have a harder time.
> Captivity, anger, self harm.
> Bad also for the captors.
>
> Without end - elsewhere, we're told,
> every border is being swamped,
> almost every ocean risked.
> Many have drowned, more will.
> Asylum? detention harms, meanwhile.=
>
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Something else is out there
godamnit
And I want to hear it
C.D.Wright
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