Yeah: catches a momentary glimpse, Bill.
I found 'the pot-bellied shorts wearer’ a bit awkward, wanted something sharper like maybe:
the pot-bellied, in shorts, ?
Doug
On Aug 5, 2014, at 4:13 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Beach Detection
>
> In pale half-dawn the pot-bellied shorts wearer
> sweeps, sweeps, seeks what lies beneath,
>
> doing the disc wave, knapsack-backed,
> furlined headphones enclamped,
>
> covering territory at a hover, pausing now
> to scrape unhurriedly before replacing
>
> sand divots. Soon, surely, all these
> healthy mornings must pay off.
>
> bw
>
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Something else is out there
godamnit
And I want to hear it
C.D.Wright
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