Thanks Bill will look into debutting pruning
P written for local gardening /allotment Magazine
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Sent: 21 May 2014 12:38
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'were' rumblings, Pat and final stanza is weakened by two 'but's. Otherwise,
fine. I laughed. Which is more than Jeremy could manage.
Bill
> On 21 May 2014, at 7:57 pm, Patrick McManus
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>
> LEISURE GARDEN
>
> when he
> Jeremy
> showy yuppie
> converted
> a good old veg
> fine tilth allotment
> into a leisure garden
> with a large
> swimming pool
> potted palms
> and sunloungers
> there was some
> rather coarse
> mutinous
> murmurings
> mutterings
> as expected
> from the troglodyte
> 'Dig For Victory'
> and Greens
> fraternities
>
> but even so
> the committee
> thought it rather
> a poor show
> to seed the pool
> with starving
> Piranha fish
> but did admit that
> it was a beautifully
> cleaned skeleton.
>
>
> pmcmanus
> r496
> late snap been out pruning Ivy with a 3 foot Jemmy!
>
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