Possibly a good idea, Lawrence. Will think on it.
I had already dropped a few, so....
Doug
On May 15, 2014, at 7:07 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> what about dropping the two occurrences of the?
>
>
> On 14 May 2014 23:32, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>> Overnight buds
>> on the bare branches green
>>
>> in a few long days leaves
>> will open small
>> flags against the blue
>>
>>
>> Douglas Barbour
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>>
>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2
>> (UofAPress).
>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>
>> Something else is out there
>> godamnit
>>
>> And I want to hear it
>>
>> C.D.Wright
>>
>
Douglas Barbour
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Latest books:
Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
Recording Dates
(Rubicon Press)
would you
care to be more
precise about whatever
it is you are
saying, I said
Bill Manhire
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