As a 'song' I like it, Sharon (except for the singing brook, the one bit you seem to have slipped back into convention for).
Doug
On 2013-07-31, at 9:56 AM, sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Song
>
> come lie with me in the sun in the sand
>
> through the turn of the world
>
> in the wet moonlight
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> under the long arms
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> of the weeping willow
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> beside the brook that sings & sings
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> come lie with me
>
> in the brittle brilliant leaves
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> all scattered again in the wind
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> in the winter snow
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> the deepest, darkest winter snow
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> come lie with me we’ll make angels
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> in the coldest winter snow
>
> --
> sharon brogan
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Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Something else is out there
godamnit
And I want to hear it
C.D.Wright
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