Try turning this into something that works... just putting the images
together took a lot of effort and now many times more for the edit and
shape/revise... the narrative is immanent to the collage and emerges
unlike traditional structuralist narrative and lyric distinctions where
narrative is determined a priori by story written as discourse. A new
narrative theory:
[TO BE REWRITTEN/ EDIT. REVISE EXCERPT ONLY]
magnetic storage points north
digital charts earth again
international standards names symbols
human rights measure
fear wandering and getting lost
alien incursion anxiety with borders
exclusion zone mess collects no data
filter noise delete from archive
sharp edges endanger falling
abyss disorder no data land
plunging gravity pulls
sexual identities dangerous
transactions making much noise
networks cannot scale and no data trace
machines broken not find repair
money over networks fuzzy
clear bytes for virtual gold
regulators freeze networks
questions asked at breakfast
and high currency rentals on
massive caverns under streets
hiding wealth over civil unrest
and quick walk link nodes
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