Thanks for added comments, very useful. Just on collage narrative, while
this basic, there is a bit more to it given the textual we are
saturated in... Montage narrative is well enough known wrt to film sense.
On 22/05/13 00:41, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> I was thinking that in the passage, the sentence fragments had the most energy, but there's also perhaps a way of breaking down the larger narrative(s) for it/they is/are certainly there, at least implied & sometimes really little stories as part of, & letting them swirl a bit more as memory itself tends to....
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> Then placing them a little more out of time (I'm thinking, partly, of the way the story deploys in Ondaatje's The Collected Works of Billy the Kid, & other such works...
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