Bill, this is a great response, and I am grateful, indeed! You have added
much new thought.
Best to you, Sheila
On Wed, Jan 9, 2013 at 12:49 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
> Sentence finishers are a blight on sentence beginners and a long sentence
> for contained lovers all right, Sheila. Maybe his stalking is for new
> expressive roads which none can stopper. Splintered sentences issue
> manywards (many words?)
>
> I like your poem.
>
> Bill
>
> On 09/01/2013, at 6:14 PM, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > She finishes
> > his sentences,
> > buys in to
> > his effrontery,
> > allows pitch
> > pure resistance
> > to derail
> > the compass from
> > its fragile
> > path by way
> > of aggravation
> >
> > He stalks
> > disaggregation
> > as if only
> > splintering survives
> > the real surrender.
> > He observes her
> > indefatigable
> > presence, precepts,
> > preemptive stricken
> > look and hooks
> > it to his
> > chapter still averse.
> >
> > Sheila E. Murphy
> >
>
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