Thanks Andrew. But I would need to write 'a way', if I changed it. I wasn't meaning 'away', at least in the sense of discard. And I wanted 'way'. 'Way' is the thing.
Will think on it - my ear is not so worried by what is there at the moment, but I will see what else can be done.
Best,
J
On 17/01/2013, at 2:15 PM, Andrew Burke wrote:
> Well, I'd put 'throw away' at the end - just because it sounds more
> natural and less stilted. (The stilted sound always irks me.) The 'w'
> sound is still there, not deminished at all.
>
> I feel the breeze <g>
>
> Andrew
>
> On 17 January 2013 07:07, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> Catch anything, Jill?
>>
>> Subtle ocean movements, economically, you may well reply.
>>
>> Bill
>>
>> On 17/01/2013, at 12:27 AM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>>> bearing to season seafront
>>>
>>> throw light throw line
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> lilt to lift
>>>
>>> water is wave is
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> behalf self
>>>
>>> throw west throw way
>>>
>>>
>>>
>
>
>
> --
> Andrew
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