No, Patrick it is a quote - a pun-ish-meant.
Lawrence, y're right: dampens. Thanks.
Just a doodle, but I might edit it into what I'm trying to compose for a
mag - under poetic pressure.
G'night all -
Andrew
On 20 June 2012 19:54, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
> Last verse line perhaps could lose a waves?????
> Cheers P
>
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> Subject: snap: wet noodles
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> rain crescendo
> dogs crest fallen
> day gets damp
>
> a tap drips
> pianissimo
>
> cross currents of
> changing seasons
> unsettle
>
> house holds tight
> to her foundations
>
> strapped to the deck
> a German yacht
> rides the waves
>
> a gift to a man
> in middle age
>
> sound waves
> light waves
> 'waves wave without greeting'*
>
> - -
>
> * jill jones poem
>
>
> Andrew
> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
>
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Andrew
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