Last verse line perhaps could lose a waves?????
Cheers P
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Subject: snap: wet noodles
rain crescendo
dogs crest fallen
day gets damp
a tap drips
pianissimo
cross currents of
changing seasons
unsettle
house holds tight
to her foundations
strapped to the deck
a German yacht
rides the waves
a gift to a man
in middle age
sound waves
light waves
'waves wave without greeting'*
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* jill jones poem
Andrew
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