Well, that's supposed to be the way to snap, ken, so good on ya. If I did make any change now, it would be to remove the 'is's in the first 2 lines...
'haunted/back' works especially well....
Doug
On 2012-05-23, at 6:56 PM, Kenneth Wolman wrote:
> Everything tends toward farewell.
> The apartment is clean at last.
> The cat is fed and stoned on catnip.
> The lease will be signed on Friday.
> And I will be gone from here
> where nothing but memories haunted
> back to the old place to build
> new hauntings.
>
> KTW
>
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