Well, that's supposed to be the way to snap, ken, so good on ya. If I did make any change now, it would be to remove the 'is's in the first 2 lines... 'haunted/back' works especially well.... Doug On 2012-05-23, at 6:56 PM, Kenneth Wolman wrote: > Everything tends toward farewell. > The apartment is clean at last. > The cat is fed and stoned on catnip. > The lease will be signed on Friday. > And I will be gone from here > where nothing but memories haunted > back to the old place to build > new hauntings. > > KTW > Douglas Barbour [log in to unmask] http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ Latest books: Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962 Wednesdays' http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html Why can’t words mean what they say? Robert Kroetsch