i will if you will
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On Wed, November 9, 2011 12:54, cris cheek wrote:
> ok. nice thinking. how about an ampersand?
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> xx
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> c
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> On Nov 9, 2011, at 6:16 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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>> Hi cris
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>>
>> I didn't say _emphasise it_
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>> I was vague. I wasn't meaning to be coy. I was speeding up. I wanted to
>> get coffee before they closed etc. The story of a panic
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>> What I have in mind is more to do with speed and rhythm. as a
>> coefficient
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>> starting with and, the way I hear it. puts the voice on a downhill run,
>> speeds it, pulls it
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>> yours beginning _slow_ is more stately
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>> and I am interested in going through that rushing
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>> I'm prioritising the uttered over the page read
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>>
>> L
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>> On Tue, November 8, 2011 19:35, cris cheek wrote:
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>>> even IF you emphasise it . . the repetition seems redundant
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>>> it's implied?
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>>> c
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>>> On Nov 8, 2011, at 12:10 PM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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>>>> depends how you read it
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>>>> L
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>>>> On Tue, November 8, 2011 17:03, cris cheek wrote:
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>>>>
>>>>> i might venture that we don't need that and after the semi-colon
>>>>>
>>>>> just launch into
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>>>>> slow broad unripe depths atop . . .
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> x
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>>>>>
>>>>> c
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>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On Nov 8, 2011, at 11:55 AM, Patrick McManus wrote:
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>>>>>
>>>>>> Sundering I sunder sometimes cheers P great stuff
>>>>>> Not sure if we need continuity? (no doubt essential and that I
>>>>>> am missing the whole point!!)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics
>>>>>> [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
>>>>>> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
>>>>>> Sent: 08 November 2011 13:12
>>>>>> To: [log in to unmask]
>>>>>> Subject: The Bar between St Agnes and The Gugh from Wingletang
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> A strong quick fluster of crayon lines
>>>>>> jabbing through into storm waves
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>>>>>> blue wash over grey, and green within both; and slow broad
>>>>>> unripe depths atop drawn stab marks joining rock and rocks
>>>>>> tenuously despite encroaching sea breakers rising moving
>>>>>> crabwise
>>>>>>
>>>>>> brown smatterings of weed break up cream and white and
>>>>>> dangerous continuity The Gugh may be solid beyond the east of
>>>>>> Agnes
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> but it's not whole
>>>>>>
>>>>>> all this a sundering of one into two, and three if sea's a
>>>>>> thing
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>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> -----
>>>>>> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
>>>>>> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
>>>>>> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
>>>>>> wfuk.org.uk/blog ----
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>>>>>
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>>>> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
>>>> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
>>>> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
>>>> wfuk.org.uk/blog ----
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>> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
>> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
>> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
>> wfuk.org.uk/blog ----
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UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
wfuk.org.uk/blog
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