depends how you read it
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On Tue, November 8, 2011 17:03, cris cheek wrote:
> i might venture that we don't need that and after the semi-colon
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> just launch into
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> slow broad unripe depths atop . . .
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> On Nov 8, 2011, at 11:55 AM, Patrick McManus wrote:
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>> Sundering I sunder sometimes cheers P great stuff
>> Not sure if we need continuity? (no doubt essential and that I am
>> missing the whole point!!)
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>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
>> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
>> Sent: 08 November 2011 13:12
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Subject: The Bar between St Agnes and The Gugh from Wingletang
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>> A strong quick fluster of crayon lines
>> jabbing through into storm waves
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>> blue wash over grey, and green within both; and slow broad unripe depths
>> atop drawn stab marks joining rock and rocks tenuously despite
>> encroaching sea breakers rising moving crabwise
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>> brown smatterings of weed break up cream and white and dangerous
>> continuity The Gugh may be solid beyond
>> the east of Agnes
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>> but it's not whole
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>> all this a sundering of one into two, and three if sea's a thing
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>> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
>> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
>> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
>> wfuk.org.uk/blog ----
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UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
wfuk.org.uk/blog
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