I really enjoyed the first six lines -the rest seems bit added on but it
could just beme and the cat Asher - is waiting to sleep on the computer cat
hairs in the printer and scanner are getting a problem
Bests old P
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
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Sent: 17 November 2010 01:54
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Subject: snap: blue wren
blue wren
flies in
flies out
this
voice balloon
can't catch it
(signified
flew through
signifier
at more than
significant
speed)
language
in leaves
tells all
*Wren's Haiku*
wit
wheat -
twit
--
Andrew
http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
'Mother Waits for Father Late' republished available at
http://www.picaropress.com/
http://www.qlrs.com/poem.asp?id=766
http://frankshome.org/AndrewBurke.html
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