I really enjoyed the first six lines -the rest seems bit added on but it could just beme and the cat Asher - is waiting to sleep on the computer cat hairs in the printer and scanner are getting a problem Bests old P -----Original Message----- From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of andrew burke Sent: 17 November 2010 01:54 To: [log in to unmask] Subject: snap: blue wren blue wren flies in flies out this voice balloon can't catch it (signified flew through signifier at more than significant speed) language in leaves tells all *Wren's Haiku* wit wheat - twit -- Andrew http://hispirits.blogspot.com/ 'Mother Waits for Father Late' republished available at http://www.picaropress.com/ http://www.qlrs.com/poem.asp?id=766 http://frankshome.org/AndrewBurke.html